This is from Tremalking to Falme aboard the Red Herring located at the north dock.
Aboard the Red Herring
A strong and sturdy boat, this three-masted bark has sufficient
accommodation for a large amount of people and cargo and the ability to
sustain them for a longer journey. Although judging from the rigging and
sails it is not originally a Seanchan vessel, it now serves the Empire. A
skiff is hanging in brackets on the starboard side.
[ obvious exits: ]
A busy dockmaster stands here, carrying a ledger (Wizinvis).
A sturdy white-maned pony tosses its head here, being ridden by you.
A captain stands here, giving orders.
* R HP:Healthy MV:Full > say order departure please
You say 'order departure please'
* R HP:Healthy MV:Full >
A captain nods with satisfaction.
* R HP:Healthy MV:Full >
The captain barks out commands to his sailors and the bark sets off.
Re: Typos
Moderator: Aureus
Re: Typos
This has to be the most often reported non-typo there is:
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Barque
A barque, barc, or bark is a type of sailing vessel with three or more masts having the fore- and mainmasts rigged square and only the mizzen (the aftmost mast) rigged fore-and-aft.
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Barque
A barque, barc, or bark is a type of sailing vessel with three or more masts having the fore- and mainmasts rigged square and only the mizzen (the aftmost mast) rigged fore-and-aft.
Re: Typos
* R HP:Scratched MV:Full > l lieutenant
Walking with a grace rarely seen in a Shienaran soldier this is one of the
selected few who serve Lord Agelmar and the Lord Majors of Fal Dara.
Trusted with the hardest task, these men are the greatest fighters of the
north.
A Shienaran lieutenant is in excellent condition.
a Shienaran lieutenant is using:
<worn on head> a metal helmet
<worn on hands> a pair of metal half-gauntlets
<wielded two-handed> a two-fisted flamberge
<worn about waist> a wide leather belt
<worn on belt> a soft leather pouch
<worn on legs> a pair of thin metal leggings
<worn on feet> a pair of thin metal boots
* R HP:Scratched MV:Full > x
No-one by that name here.
* R HP:Scratched MV:Full > look
Beneath a Cliff's Ledge
Providing adequate protection from both the northern winds and the sun
during day this indentation below the cliff's overhang is an ideal resting
place. The cliff's sheer wall is cold to the touch with a slight moisture
collecting on the rocks.
[ obvious exits: S W ]
The corpse of a rat is lying here.
A Tairen bloodstock stallion stands here, tail swaying with the breeze, being ridden by you.
It's not a typo but afaik there's no prevailing canon about Shienarans not being graceful, which is what that sentence sounds like. If the description is meant to highlight that he has exceptional grace (for a soldier) it should just say 'a grace rarely seen in a soldier'. The descriptions of other Shienaran soldiers routinely have descriptors like 'with practiced ease'. It's also contradictory because these mobs are generic soldiers for their rank.
Walking with a grace rarely seen in a Shienaran soldier this is one of the
selected few who serve Lord Agelmar and the Lord Majors of Fal Dara.
Trusted with the hardest task, these men are the greatest fighters of the
north.
A Shienaran lieutenant is in excellent condition.
a Shienaran lieutenant is using:
<worn on head> a metal helmet
<worn on hands> a pair of metal half-gauntlets
<wielded two-handed> a two-fisted flamberge
<worn about waist> a wide leather belt
<worn on belt> a soft leather pouch
<worn on legs> a pair of thin metal leggings
<worn on feet> a pair of thin metal boots
* R HP:Scratched MV:Full > x
No-one by that name here.
* R HP:Scratched MV:Full > look
Beneath a Cliff's Ledge
Providing adequate protection from both the northern winds and the sun
during day this indentation below the cliff's overhang is an ideal resting
place. The cliff's sheer wall is cold to the touch with a slight moisture
collecting on the rocks.
[ obvious exits: S W ]
The corpse of a rat is lying here.
A Tairen bloodstock stallion stands here, tail swaying with the breeze, being ridden by you.
It's not a typo but afaik there's no prevailing canon about Shienarans not being graceful, which is what that sentence sounds like. If the description is meant to highlight that he has exceptional grace (for a soldier) it should just say 'a grace rarely seen in a soldier'. The descriptions of other Shienaran soldiers routinely have descriptors like 'with practiced ease'. It's also contradictory because these mobs are generic soldiers for their rank.
Last edited by Itesh on Fri Oct 19, 2018 4:06 pm, edited 1 time in total.
Reason: Fixed - deimped Shienaran feelings
Reason: Fixed - deimped Shienaran feelings
Re: Typos
* HP:Healthy MV:Fresh > Falme Barracks
A cavernous stone archway forms the entrance to a large, almost palace-like
building which appears to be used as a barracks for the Ever Victorious
ARmy, as well as to house any foreign soldiers wishing to join the Corenne.
A glimpse down a corridor and through a distant doorway reveals a dorm
containing beds, with huge trunks sitting at their feet, a place for the
occupants to store their belongings.
[ obvious exits: N S ]
Some thick-soled, heavy leather boots stand stiffly together.
A set of chainmail leggings lay upon the ground.
A set of chainmail sleeves lie upon the ground.
A densely woven shirt of thick mail is here.
A bundle of chainmail lies on the ground.
The barracks keeper performs his duties here.
A cavernous stone archway forms the entrance to a large, almost palace-like
building which appears to be used as a barracks for the Ever Victorious
ARmy, as well as to house any foreign soldiers wishing to join the Corenne.
A glimpse down a corridor and through a distant doorway reveals a dorm
containing beds, with huge trunks sitting at their feet, a place for the
occupants to store their belongings.
[ obvious exits: N S ]
Some thick-soled, heavy leather boots stand stiffly together.
A set of chainmail leggings lay upon the ground.
A set of chainmail sleeves lie upon the ground.
A densely woven shirt of thick mail is here.
A bundle of chainmail lies on the ground.
The barracks keeper performs his duties here.
Last edited by Itesh on Fri Oct 19, 2018 4:00 pm, edited 1 time in total.
Reason: Fixed
Reason: Fixed
Re: Typos
Garden of Silver Breezes
This place called a 'garden' is actually a rather large wine shop. Polished
green balustrades replace one wall of the shop. The open area overlooks a
hill that falls away to give a clear view of the harbor, across the domes
and spires of the city. The harbor is crowded with ships. Up the curving
staircase is another floor to the wine shop. The staircase is blocked off
for rennovations. A sign hangs on the far wall.
[ obvious exits: E ]
A woman of indeterminate age gives a sleek smile at your patronage.
* HP:Healthy MV:Tiring > l sign
You do not see that here.
This place called a 'garden' is actually a rather large wine shop. Polished
green balustrades replace one wall of the shop. The open area overlooks a
hill that falls away to give a clear view of the harbor, across the domes
and spires of the city. The harbor is crowded with ships. Up the curving
staircase is another floor to the wine shop. The staircase is blocked off
for rennovations. A sign hangs on the far wall.
[ obvious exits: E ]
A woman of indeterminate age gives a sleek smile at your patronage.
* HP:Healthy MV:Tiring > l sign
You do not see that here.
Last edited by Itesh on Fri Oct 19, 2018 3:55 pm, edited 1 time in total.
Reason: Fixed - sign removed
Reason: Fixed - sign removed
Re: Typos
* R HP:Scratched MV:Fresh - a cavalry soldier: Scratched > Bend in the Road
The road turns here, going south and west, thus evading a small hill to the
north. At the base of the hill, the remains of a camp can be discerned,
probably raised by some small merchant caravan heading south towards Caemlyn.
[ obvious exits: N S W ]
There are some tracks of a ridden mount leaving <<WEST<<
There are some tracks of a ridden mount leaving vvSOUTHvv
There are some tracks of a ridden mount leaving vvSOUTHvv
There are some tracks of a ridden mount leaving <<WEST<<
The corpse of a roan charger is lying here.
|T1|.A sleek well-trained torm glares fiercely about, being ridden by you.
A cavalry soldier is here, fighting YOU!
A cavalry officer is here, fighting YOU!
A cavalry officer bellows 'Meren is attacking me at Bend in the Road. Rally the Queen's Guard!'
Queen's Guard have been Lion Warden (again) for a long time now. I did the same on the Four Kings patrol, same yell.
The road turns here, going south and west, thus evading a small hill to the
north. At the base of the hill, the remains of a camp can be discerned,
probably raised by some small merchant caravan heading south towards Caemlyn.
[ obvious exits: N S W ]
There are some tracks of a ridden mount leaving <<WEST<<
There are some tracks of a ridden mount leaving vvSOUTHvv
There are some tracks of a ridden mount leaving vvSOUTHvv
There are some tracks of a ridden mount leaving <<WEST<<
The corpse of a roan charger is lying here.
|T1|.A sleek well-trained torm glares fiercely about, being ridden by you.
A cavalry soldier is here, fighting YOU!
A cavalry officer is here, fighting YOU!
A cavalry officer bellows 'Meren is attacking me at Bend in the Road. Rally the Queen's Guard!'
Queen's Guard have been Lion Warden (again) for a long time now. I did the same on the Four Kings patrol, same yell.
Last edited by Itesh on Fri Oct 19, 2018 3:07 pm, edited 1 time in total.
Reason: Fixed the eleventy billion occurences of this
Reason: Fixed the eleventy billion occurences of this
Re: Typos
In Keep zone, should be 'lies to the east'
* HP:Wounded MV:Fresh - a Dha'vol trolloc: Scratched >
You pound a Dha'vol trolloc's body very hard.
A Dha'vol trolloc tickles your right hand with his cleave.
* HP:Wounded MV:Fresh - a Dha'vol trolloc: Hurt > look
The Northern Wing of the Grand Hall
This is the northern-most tip of the Grand hall. Time has played a harsh role
in the destruction of this wing. The floor has large cracks allowing small
plants to grow through. There are huge cracks racing through the walls which
have ruined the beautiful marble slabs that make it up. The library lies the
the east, and the hall leads south.
[ obvious exits: E S ]
A Dha'vol trolloc is here, fighting YOU!
* HP:Wounded MV:Fresh - a Dha'vol trolloc: Hurt >
You pound a Dha'vol trolloc's right leg extremely hard.
A Dha'vol trolloc cleaves your right arm.
* HP:Wounded MV:Fresh - a Dha'vol trolloc: Hurt >
* HP:Wounded MV:Fresh - a Dha'vol trolloc: Scratched >
You pound a Dha'vol trolloc's body very hard.
A Dha'vol trolloc tickles your right hand with his cleave.
* HP:Wounded MV:Fresh - a Dha'vol trolloc: Hurt > look
The Northern Wing of the Grand Hall
This is the northern-most tip of the Grand hall. Time has played a harsh role
in the destruction of this wing. The floor has large cracks allowing small
plants to grow through. There are huge cracks racing through the walls which
have ruined the beautiful marble slabs that make it up. The library lies the
the east, and the hall leads south.
[ obvious exits: E S ]
A Dha'vol trolloc is here, fighting YOU!
* HP:Wounded MV:Fresh - a Dha'vol trolloc: Hurt >
You pound a Dha'vol trolloc's right leg extremely hard.
A Dha'vol trolloc cleaves your right arm.
* HP:Wounded MV:Fresh - a Dha'vol trolloc: Hurt >
Last edited by Itesh on Fri Oct 19, 2018 2:53 pm, edited 1 time in total.
Reason: Fixed
Reason: Fixed