Re: Typos

[Asandra]

In the Lofty Passage
Carved through the rock of the island of Tar Valon is as wide as any in the
Tower. The main passage is lit by lamps in iron brackets high on the pale
walls, but many crossing corridors lay shrouded in darkness, or with only
widely spaced lamps making small lonely pools of light. The smooth stone
floor if free of any speck of dust and the air is cool and dry.
[ obvious exits: U ]

[Nevirha]

Corridor Outside the Open Cells
Cut from the rock that forms the very foundation of the island of Tar
Valon, the cells' walls and floor consist of roughly chiselled stone. Bars
embedded into the floor and ceiling form a number of cells, each equipped
with a small cot, a chair, wash basin and a chamber pot. A small bench sits
against the wall in the corridor, a place for any Aes Sedai holding weaves
on the prisoner to sit while they are on guard duty. Plain oil lamps hung
from hooks to illuminate the area when it is in use.
[ obvious exits: U ]

Should be hang (or remove to in the next part of the phrase)

[Erulisse]

* R HP:Healthy SP:Strong MV:Full > Main Street
You are standing on the main street of Maradon, which runs through the
entire city. Here the road is bordered by warehouses on the eastern side
and city walls in the west. The nearest warehouse in the east has had it
doors boarded short, marking it no longer in use.

Maradon s w of general. Should be boarded shut.

[Kosch3i]

Maybe its for the vertically challenged

[Etain]

The Caemlyn town crier, when asked for quests:

The Caemlyn town crier tells you 'Rats are a damm plague round the city, bring me a scalp!'

The second one should either be around or 'round.

[Camille]

A raken slowly rises toward across Falme, then swoops down towards the ocean.


* HP:Healthy SP:Strong MV:Fresh >
A raken flies away towards the cliffside.

Just a really odd way to phrase things

[Ciara]

In the dweller cave at 4x, southern Almoth.


Ledge Over a Break
This ledge over looks the break just to the north. The edge of the cliff is
very loose pebbles and a few large rocks. The drop into the bread looks to
be at least ten paces. The cave ends to the west, but stretches on for a
while to the east and south. The ceiling is very short here, and several
stalagtites can be seen hanging from the ceiling.
[ obvious exits: E S ]

Believe this should be stalactites.

[Theid]

Citadel of Statues
The room opens up into a large chamber, one possibly used for receiving
an audience. Nooks with pedestals line the walls of this circular room.
Atop each pedestal stands a statue or carving. An ancient throne sits uopn
a tiered platform, cushions still in tact.

upon

[Kanae]

* HP:Healthy MV:Strong > look jimar
This man looks youthful for a man in his thirties, with a pretty face and
black hair. He runs a tight ship, instructing the Tower Guard and initiates
of the Tower on combat tactics.
of the Tower on combat tactics and stealth.

Jimar Chubain is in excellent condition.

Jimar Chubain is using:
<worn on head> a metal helmet
<worn about body> a seven-striped tabard
<worn on hands> a pair of metal half-gauntlets
<wielded> a dagger of gleaming steel
<worn on legs> a pair of thin metal leggings
<worn on feet> a pair of thin metal boots

[Taziar]

Forested Hills zone (2 zones north of Amador)

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On the West Bank of a Slow River
A slow, very broad river flows to the east of here. This river is the
source of the water that makes this area so damp. The air is humid, in part
due to the many trees that shade these banks from the sun during the day
and from  the winds that could carry the moist air away.
[ obvious exits: W ]

double space in last line of room description between from AND the