Ely edit 27 Jul 2021.
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Total: 1 qps to Riena, who is in the log
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I was going through some old logs and found this.
Tear Central Square
Directly facing the Stone, drooping and elegant rows of laurel trees at the
edges mark the boundary of this square, which has wide redbrick paths leading
to a permanently-flowing fountain in the center. A white marble building to the
east has its door open, with a sign engraved above the door. To the north and
west, passers-by wander by the square.
The waters of a blue-veined marble fountain pour forth here.
An oil lamp, set in a steel cage, hangs from a high wooden pole.
A stout wooden barrel stands nearby.
A board hangs on a wall peppered with tales of glory, adventure and history.
A Tairen bloodstock stallion stands here, tail swaying with the breeze, being ridden by you.
A Defender of the Stone maintains peace in the city.
The postmaster stands here, ready to deliver the mail.
The Tear town crier stands here, spreading the news.
An Illuminator's assistant stands here carrying some colored tubes.
A sharp-eyed hawk has arrived from the north.
A sharp-eyed hawk kisses Riena.
A Defender of the Stone boggles at the thought.
Riena's cheeks are burning.
Riena hugs a sharp-eyed hawk.
Riena smiles at a sharp-eyed hawk.
A sharp-eyed hawk looks at Riena with sharp eyes.
A Defender of the Stone leaves north.
Riena smiles at a sharp-eyed hawk.
A Defender of the Stone says 'Affectionate birds.'
Riena offers her arm for a hawk.
Riena nods in agreement.
A sharp-eyed hawk comes in for a landing.
Riena says 'I love animals.'
Riena says 'especially birds.'
A sharp-eyed hawk nods in agreement.
A plainly dressed man has arrived from the west.
A Defender of the Stone leaves west.
Riena gently smoothes a hawks feathers.
A sharp-eyed hawk preens.
A Defender of the Stone narrates 'Where is Blodfest?'
Amilyndra narrates 'For those who do not yet know, Blodfest was last known to be camped southeast of Far Madding.'
Riena snickers softly.
A Defender of the Stone narrates 'Thank you.'
A plainly dressed man leaves north.
Amilyndra narrates 'You're welcome Defender.'
The Tear town crier says 'Your sister always knows where Blodfest is. Is she a darkfriend?'
Riena says 'Oh no she is most definately not'
It starts to rain.
The River Lady has arrived at the docks.
Riena says 'She lets everyone know where he is so that they can avoid the place'
Riena says 'so to speak'
Riena says 'that or go kill it.'
The Tear town crier says 'Why don't the Forresters kill it?'
Riena says 'well we have'
Riena says 'I've raided that place many times'
The Tear town crier says 'I would like to raid it, but all I do is cry all day.'
Riena uses her dagger cutting a piece of meat.
The Tear town crier bursts into tears.
Riena comforts the Tear town crier.
Riena says 'Well thats not a very nice job.'
Riena says 'nothing to cry about good sir.'
Riena offers a piece of meat for her hawk.
A sharp-eyed hawk perks up and scans the sky.
Riena pats a sharp-eyed hawk on its head.
A beggar bellows 'Alms for the poor! Alms for the poor!'
A sharp-eyed hawk snatches the meat from Riena's hand.
Riena says 'Well if you want Mr. Crier your always welcome to come next time we raid Blodfest.'
The Tear town crier says 'What do you do all day?'
Riena says 'Well I do many things, but most of all I love to simply explore what Mother nature has to offer.'
A sharp-eyed hawk blinks slowly.
Riena says 'She has many secrets.'
The sun slowly sinks in the west, casting long shadows across the city.
Riena smiles as she reminisces her adventures.
The Tear town crier says 'Got any news you want me to report?'
Riena says 'Oh'
Riena thinks really hard.
A lord has arrived from the east.
A city lamplighter has arrived from the north.
A sharp-eyed hawk leaps from your arm perch and attacks a hidden rodent.
A city lamplighter lights a streetlamp.
A city lamplighter leaves north.
A Defender of the Stone has arrived from the north.
A Defender of the Stone stops using a lantern.
An illuminator's assistant fumbles with a couple of tubes resulting in a **BANG**
A sharp-eyed hawk is startled and flies high in the sky.
Riena blinks her eyes innocently.
A Defender of the Stone leaves east.
Riena says 'Why you clumsy illuminator!'
The ratter has arrived from the west.
A Defender of the Stone leaves north.
A Defender of the Stone has arrived from the north.
An illuminator's assistant blushes.
An illuminator's assistant says 'I'm very new at this.'
Riena says 'Oh well do be careful'
The Tear town crier says 'My attention wandered, can you tell me all of that again?'
Riena says 'Oh its alright.'
Riena nudges an illuminator's assistant with her elbow.
Riena nods in agreement.
An illuminator's assistant drops something else, a red powder!
Riena whispers to an illuminator's assistant, You better pick that up.
An illuminator's assistant busily but carefully sweeps up the red powder.
Riena smiles happily.
A lord has arrived from the east.
A Defender of the Stone leaves west.
A lord sniffs arrogantly at the sight of a Forrester.
A lord leaves east.
A lord has arrived from the east.
Riena looks at a lord.
A Defender of the Stone has arrived from the north.
Riena thinks really hard.
The ratter leaves north.
The ratter has arrived from the north.
Taydelli has arrived from the north.
Taydelli leaves north.
Riena says 'oh!'
A lord says to himself 'Riff raff'
Riena says 'Maybe you could narrate that Amilyndra and Pathfynder get married already.'
Riena says 'That woman has been betrothed for years.'
The Tear town crier snickers softly.
Riena smiles happily.
The Tear town crier narrates 'Hear ye hear ye, it has been brought to my attention that the lovely lady Amilyndra has been betrothed to Lord Pathfynder for long years.'
The sun peeks over the eastern wall of the city.
The Tear town crier narrates 'Let it be known that her sister Riena hopes they are married SOON, so that the honor of both be preserved.'
Volde narrates 'what he finally knocked her up?'
Riena says 'oh hmm'
Amilyndra narrates 'Absolutely not.'
The Tear town crier says 'Like that?'
A city lamplighter has arrived from the north.
Riena giggles.
A city lamplighter extinguishes a streetlamp.
A city lamplighter leaves north.
Nim narrates 'Path asked her, and then realized it was a bad idea'
A lord snickers softly.
Riena says 'Shes going to have a few words with me I'm sure!'
The day has begun.
The ratter bellows 'Paying out for scalps of the shadow at Tear Central Square.'
An illuminator's assistant nods in agreement.
The ratter blushes.
Riena cringes in terror.
A Defender of the Stone leaves north.
The Tear town crier apologizes to everyone for his complete stupidity.
Taydelli narrates 'lies! He is saving up for the new tree home'
Riena smiles happily.
Valar narrates 'I heard he had an affair with a squirrel'
Ryallin narrates 'Rude comments are dishonorable.'
A Defender of the Stone has arrived from the north.
A lord leaves east.
A sharp-eyed hawk comes in to land on Riena's glove again.
The ratter leaves west.
Riena strokes her hawks fine feathers.
Nim narrates 'Those other two Forrestors got hitched real quick'
Nim narrates 'None of this wait for years nonsense!'
The Tear town crier says 'Nim's got big opinions.'
You narrate 'Good things take time...'
A sharp-eyed hawk says 'Squawk.'
Riena says 'Oh he does yes.'
A lord has arrived from the east.
The Tear town crier says 'Is Amilyndra upset?'
Riena says 'Oh no.'
The Tear town crier looks relieved.
Riena smiles happily.
Riena says 'Nim use to be a Forrester'
A Defender of the Stone has arrived from the east.
The Tear town crier says 'Why did he leave?'
Riena says 'I have no idea.'
Riena says 'I guess the Forrester life was not what he wanted.'
A lord leaves north.
The Tear town crier nods in agreement.
The Tear town crier says 'I had better get back to my crying.'
Riena smiles happily.
Riena says 'Not too many tears.'
Riena pats a sharp-eyed hawk on its head.
A Defender of the Stone leaves west.
The Tear town crier says 'Oh one more thing...'
Riena nods in agreement.
Taydelli has arrived from the north, riding a bloodstock stallion.
Taydelli leaves north riding a bloodstock stallion.
Riena leans forward to listen.
Riena says 'You were saying?'
The Tear town crier says 'How do you get the birds to follow you?'
Riena says 'I show it some meat.'
Riena says 'I can show you if you like.'
A sharp-eyed hawk stops following Riena.
Riena gets a large slab of meat from a backpack.
Riena shows a large slab of meat to a sharp-eyed hawk.
A sharp-eyed hawk tilts its head.
A sharp-eyed hawk starts following Riena.
Riena pats a sharp-eyed hawk.
Riena gives a large slab of meat to a sharp-eyed hawk.
A sharp-eyed hawk purrs contentedly.
Riena says 'but I cant order him to do anything.'
Riena says 'Has a mind of his own, just follows me around.'
A rat starts following Riena.
A rat starts following Riena.
A rat leaves west.
A rat starts following Riena.
Tear Central Square
Directly facing the Stone, drooping and elegant rows of laurel trees at the
edges mark the boundary of this square, which has wide redbrick paths leading
to a permanently-flowing fountain in the center. A white marble building to the
east has its door open, with a sign engraved above the door. To the north and
west, passers-by wander by the square.
The waters of a blue-veined marble fountain pour forth here.
An oil lamp, set in a steel cage, hangs from a high wooden pole.
A stout wooden barrel stands nearby.
A board hangs on a wall peppered with tales of glory, adventure and history.
A rat scurries around trying to get out of sight.
A rat scurries around trying to get out of sight.
A rat scurries around trying to get out of sight.
A Defender of the Stone maintains peace in the city.
A large hawk with grey-brown feathers with a bone cylinder on his leg flies low.
A Tairen bloodstock stallion stands here, tail swaying with the breeze, being ridden by you.
The postmaster stands here, ready to deliver the mail.
The Tear town crier stands here, spreading the news.
An Illuminator's assistant stands here carrying some colored tubes.
A lord has arrived from the north.
A Defender of the Stone bellows 'Rohan has entered Tear!'
A rat points its finger at a sharp-eyed hawk and laughs obnoxiously.
Riena smiles happily.
Riena says 'Its not a falcon'
A sharp-eyed hawk glares, then swoops down and eats the rat in one gulp.
Riena snickers softly.
A falcon has arrived from the north.
Riena looks at a falcon.
A falcon eyes the hawk suspiciously.
A sharp-eyed hawk nods at a falcon.
Riena says 'Such a pretty bird.'
A falcon cocks his head to the side, is she flirting?
Riena snickers softly.
A sharp-eyed hawk says 'Pppiiieeeeeeuuuuuuu!'
The sun slowly sinks in the west, casting long shadows across the city.
A falcon looks impressed.
A falcon now follows a sharp-eyed hawk.
Riena watches happily.
A sharp-eyed hawk flirts outrageously with a falcon.
A falcon blushes.
Riena blinks her eyes innocently.
The ratter has arrived from the west.
A falcon whispers softly to a sharp-eyed hawk.
The night has begun.
Riena wonders what breed a bird would come from a Falcon and a hawk....
SPLAT! The falcon swoops down on a rat.
CRUNCH!! The falcon dives and digs talons into a rat.
A rat is dead! R.I.P.
A rat stops following you.
A rat is dead! R.I.P.
A rat stops following you.
A trained peregrine falcon gulps down the rat's mangled corpse.
A trained peregrine falcon gulps down the rat's mutilated corpse.
A Defender of the Stone stops using a lantern.
A trained peregrine falcon glares at a sharp-eyed hawk.
A trained peregrine falcon blushes.
A falcon apologizes to everyone for its complete stupidity.
A city lamplighter has arrived from the north.
Riena snickers softly.
A sharp-eyed hawk bows up boldly.
A trained peregrine falcon glares around him.
A trained peregrine falcon leaves west.
Riena comforts a sharp-eyed hawk.
A trained peregrine falcon has arrived from the west.
A trained peregrine falcon gives a falcon an order.
A falcon has an indifferent look.
A trained peregrine falcon leaves east.
A trained peregrine falcon has arrived from the east.
A trained peregrine falcon now follows a falcon.
A trained peregrine falcon scolds a falcon for its actions.
A falcon apologizes to everyone for its complete stupidity.
Riena smiles at a falcon.
A sharp-eyed hawk glares as his new girlfriend goes back to her old boyfriend...
A falcon stops following a sharp-eyed hawk.
A trained peregrine falcon stops following a falcon.
A falcon now follows a trained peregrine falcon.
A trained peregrine falcon nods to himself, he must need reassurance.
Riena grins at a trained peregrine falcon.
The ratter leaves north.
A trained peregrine falcon squawks in contentment.
BHAM! The falcon dives and digs talons into a rat.
A rat is dead! R.I.P.
A trained peregrine falcon gulps down the rat's mutilated corpse.
A falcon rubs up against a trained peregrine falcon and purrs softly.
The two lovebirds fly off together.
A trained peregrine falcon leaves north.
A falcon leaves north.
Riena smiles happily.
Riena claps her hands enthusiastically.
Riena comforts a sharp-eyed hawk.
A sharp-eyed hawk looks indifferent.
Riena says 'Maybe next time my friend.'
A sharp-eyed hawk thinks 'I get chicks every day, I don't need her.'
A sharp-eyed hawk nods to itself, it must need reassurance.
Riena rolls her eyes.
A sharp-eyed hawk flirts outrageously with Riena.
A Defender of the Stone leaves north.
Riena says 'Wrong species Mr. Hawk...wrong species.'
A sharp-eyed hawk shrugs helplessly.
Riena says 'What you want is a beautiful young hawk woman, to fly away with and make babies.'
Riena smiles at a sharp-eyed hawk.
A sharp-eyed hawk shakes its head.
A sharp-eyed hawk wants to follow Riena around, exploring, hunting, meeting babes.
Riena says 'Anyway, its about time we head home to the Tree.'
Riena looks at a sharp-eyed hawk and rolls her eyes.
The world returns to it's more predictable state...
For the Love of Forresters, Falcons and Hawks --- &RPaward
Re: For the Love of Forresters, Falcons and Hawks
Hahaha! That is one talented Imm 

Re: For the Love of Forresters, Falcons and Hawks
That was hilarious!
Are Ami and Path married yet?
I miss my old Forrester pals.
Are Ami and Path married yet?
I miss my old Forrester pals.