Irinjivar justice. --- &RPaward
Posted: Fri Feb 17, 2017 6:39 pm
1-6 qps, depending on length and quality.
Potential +1 qp: if part of a series: x
Total: 5 qps, for both stories
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A young man sits with his legs and feet dangling over the edge of a two story farmhouse.
He looks back over his home toward the village centre, the day is just beginning yet most if not all the
homes in Irinjivar are lightly abuzz with activity. Large horse paddocks are attached to the farmhouses,
filled with horses of all colors and ages. They whiny and neigh as children change thier feed and muck
stables. Further still the city of Maradon can be seen over the treetops, hazy in the morning light. All
proof it seemed that nothing ever changed, that this day would be just as any other.
He turns back and looks to the forest beyond his small town, such thrilling times, danger sort and
vanquished. Exploring the surrounding woodlands without an escort had always been strictly forbidden.
This meant of cause the older children borrowed a horse and did so at every opportunity. Secret caves
and hidden niches had been thiers to plunder, many times having to explain away bruises and cuts received
for some small reward or trinket.
However all those close calls and near escapes had caught up with them and grieving parents were screaming for blood.
Two young boys had been killed in the forests to the north, murdered by foul creatures of the shadow.
Of cause he was to blame, he was the oldest.
Well before dawn he had saddled his horse and rode north, tasked by his father to hunt for fresh game, mark
the trail and await his arrival. However the cool steady breeze felt relaxing and the forest had yet to wake
as he slid from his mount to continue tracking a deer. He moved easily between the trees without a thought
of his promise to wait. Suddenly a light bang followed by a much louder thud echoed through the forest. Harsh
growls and metal on metal, the sound of splintering wood and the screams of his friends.
He had ran towards the noise without thought, bursting through the underbrush into the small clearing.
An abandoned hut sat against a large boulder, its sorry excuse for a door lying at his feet.
The sounds had changed from those of fighting to those of a delighted animal, gorging itself on a fresh kill.
He then drew his sword and slowly approached the hut, a feeling something was close made him turn quickly....
.....Cold eye-less gaze rips deep into his soul as the sword falls limp from his hand.
Time seems to slow as the Myrddraal steps closer, his black draping cloak still in the wind.
He reaches out a waxy white hand and.....
Shaking his head the young man stands and moves inside, slowly moving down the stairs and out the front door.
Crossing the small dirt road to the sellers yard, he soon begins to notice people averting thier gaze as he passes.
He moves before the gathered Elders and townspeople to stand behind the chair placed for him, a sad, troubled
look upon his face. Eyeing the crowd nervously, he seems unsettled as though looking for someone.
The Elders sit and motion everyone to do the same.
A stern faced elder waits for those that can find seating, the voices drop to a whisper and then stop.
"We are here today on this the 15th day of the month of Nesan, to punish the actions of Kush Hofor, which were found
to have contributed to the deaths of Rowan Jahn and Wolt Hapar."
"The accused has acknowledged his part in this and although yet of age shall be put to task in the Borderlands,
perhaps thier guidance and discipline will teach him the responsibility he so sorely lacks."
"A letter will be sent this day to his families choice of Borderguard. Make note of these actions so as not to
leave them unaware of the situation. If you receive no reply, Kush Hofor will be put into forced labor for a period
no less than five years."
Standing, the Elders move as one from the yard, seeking to relieve themselves of the heat and dust as the crowd disperses.
Slowly his mother steps out of the crowd, moving to comfort him. He stands and hugs her lightly as her sobs become
uncontrollable. He gently moves her back toward the farmhouse, people moving around them as if some invisible force
repelled them. They sit across the table from each other, he grasps her hands, looks into her swollen tear-filled eyes.
"It is how we honor them that matters now"
Potential +1 qp: if part of a series: x
Total: 5 qps, for both stories
*****************************************
A young man sits with his legs and feet dangling over the edge of a two story farmhouse.
He looks back over his home toward the village centre, the day is just beginning yet most if not all the
homes in Irinjivar are lightly abuzz with activity. Large horse paddocks are attached to the farmhouses,
filled with horses of all colors and ages. They whiny and neigh as children change thier feed and muck
stables. Further still the city of Maradon can be seen over the treetops, hazy in the morning light. All
proof it seemed that nothing ever changed, that this day would be just as any other.
He turns back and looks to the forest beyond his small town, such thrilling times, danger sort and
vanquished. Exploring the surrounding woodlands without an escort had always been strictly forbidden.
This meant of cause the older children borrowed a horse and did so at every opportunity. Secret caves
and hidden niches had been thiers to plunder, many times having to explain away bruises and cuts received
for some small reward or trinket.
However all those close calls and near escapes had caught up with them and grieving parents were screaming for blood.
Two young boys had been killed in the forests to the north, murdered by foul creatures of the shadow.
Of cause he was to blame, he was the oldest.
Well before dawn he had saddled his horse and rode north, tasked by his father to hunt for fresh game, mark
the trail and await his arrival. However the cool steady breeze felt relaxing and the forest had yet to wake
as he slid from his mount to continue tracking a deer. He moved easily between the trees without a thought
of his promise to wait. Suddenly a light bang followed by a much louder thud echoed through the forest. Harsh
growls and metal on metal, the sound of splintering wood and the screams of his friends.
He had ran towards the noise without thought, bursting through the underbrush into the small clearing.
An abandoned hut sat against a large boulder, its sorry excuse for a door lying at his feet.
The sounds had changed from those of fighting to those of a delighted animal, gorging itself on a fresh kill.
He then drew his sword and slowly approached the hut, a feeling something was close made him turn quickly....
.....Cold eye-less gaze rips deep into his soul as the sword falls limp from his hand.
Time seems to slow as the Myrddraal steps closer, his black draping cloak still in the wind.
He reaches out a waxy white hand and.....
Shaking his head the young man stands and moves inside, slowly moving down the stairs and out the front door.
Crossing the small dirt road to the sellers yard, he soon begins to notice people averting thier gaze as he passes.
He moves before the gathered Elders and townspeople to stand behind the chair placed for him, a sad, troubled
look upon his face. Eyeing the crowd nervously, he seems unsettled as though looking for someone.
The Elders sit and motion everyone to do the same.
A stern faced elder waits for those that can find seating, the voices drop to a whisper and then stop.
"We are here today on this the 15th day of the month of Nesan, to punish the actions of Kush Hofor, which were found
to have contributed to the deaths of Rowan Jahn and Wolt Hapar."
"The accused has acknowledged his part in this and although yet of age shall be put to task in the Borderlands,
perhaps thier guidance and discipline will teach him the responsibility he so sorely lacks."
"A letter will be sent this day to his families choice of Borderguard. Make note of these actions so as not to
leave them unaware of the situation. If you receive no reply, Kush Hofor will be put into forced labor for a period
no less than five years."
Standing, the Elders move as one from the yard, seeking to relieve themselves of the heat and dust as the crowd disperses.
Slowly his mother steps out of the crowd, moving to comfort him. He stands and hugs her lightly as her sobs become
uncontrollable. He gently moves her back toward the farmhouse, people moving around them as if some invisible force
repelled them. They sit across the table from each other, he grasps her hands, looks into her swollen tear-filled eyes.
"It is how we honor them that matters now"