Ely edit Jul 21 2024:
1-8 qps, depending on length and quality.
Rplizer +1 qps : x
Extra meticulous edit +1 qps : o
Length bonus +1-2 qps : o
Part of a series +1 qps: o
Summary: +1 qps : o
Total: 4 qps, because the ending turned everything around. Well done.
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Vala smiles at Dennel.
Dennel winks suggestively at Vala.
Dennel says ‘Hello Accepted’
Vala says ‘Welcome back to Tar Valon!’
Dennel says ‘Thank you Vala it seems as though I may be spending some time here’
Valla says ‘I don’t want to see you fighting Lord Draz here in the city.
Dennel says ‘Oh, that will not happen’
Vala nods in agreement.
Vala says ‘Looks like he won’t be hard to catch’
Dennel says ‘Oh, I’m not here for Lord Wanted’
Dennel says ‘I am searching for Alayla Sedai’
Dennel says ‘She cannot dodge me forever’
Vala says ‘I haven’t had the pleasure of meeting her yet’
Dennel nods at Vala.
Dennel says ‘We have a long overdue appointment at the bathhouses’
Tolza has arrived from the south.
Vala shrugs helplessly.
Vala curtseys before Tolza.
Tolza gives Dennel a faint smile as her eyes dart to her book.
Tolza leaves south.
Tolza has arrived from the south.
Tolza leaves north.
Dennel says ‘Tricksy people these Browns’
Vala nods in agreement.
Dennel says ‘Always scurrying’
Dennel says ‘If I recall correctly, I once told you you should go for the Brown’
Dennel peers closely at Vala, trying to figure her out.
Vala says ‘And I did so’
Dennel says ‘I hope you will not prove so tricksy’
Dennel says ‘and scurry less’
Vala grins at Dennel.
Dennel says ‘Where can a man obtain half a side of deer around here? I have a hunger that will not be satisfied by words’
Dennel looks to Vala hopefully.
Vala says ‘How about a steak?’
Dennel says ‘Half a deer it is then!’
Vala points towards the Osenrein gate.
Dennel sits down.
Dennel begins to set out an imaginary table.
Dennel sets out two places and lays out what could only be guessed to be food?
Dennel shouts with glee ‘Hooray, the deer has arrived’.
Vala eyes the food suspiciously.
Dennel says ‘Vala please take a seat, I have had this meal prepared for you as well’
Vala says ‘Please excuse me a moment’
Vala leaves south.
Vala arrives from the south.
Vala sits down and rests on a bench.
Vala give Dennel a mug.
Dennel licks his lips as he wonders where to start.
Vala says ‘Cheers’
Dennel says ‘Thank you Vala’
Vala drinks stout ale from a mug.
Dennel reaches to take a hefty portion of what could be deer? Who knows.
Dennel grins evilly.
Dennel begins to greedily shove handful after handful of air into his mouth savouring every bite.
Vala gets a choice steak from an oilskin bag.
Dennel burps loudly.
Vala gives Dennel a choice streak.
Dennel says ’Excuse me’
Vala gets a hunk of beef from an oilskin bag.
Vala tastes a little bit of a hunk of beef.
Vala drinks stout ale from a mug.
Maddy calls for the TarlomensGate to be opened.
The TarlomensGate is opened from the other side.
Maddy has arrived from the north.
Dennel reaches again for a portion of…… lets call it pie?
Maddy smiles happily
The TarlomensGate closes quietly.
Vala beams a smile at Maddy.
Maddy says ‘Hello’
Dennel says ‘Ahh Maddy’
Dennel says ‘Please have a seat, join our great feast’
Maddy smiles at Dennel.
Maddy sits down on a bench.
Maddy says ‘Thank you’
Dennel quickly shovels another handful of air into his mouth chewing with gusto.
Vala tastes a little bit of a hunk of beef.
Vala drinks stout ale from a mug.
Denel wipes away gravy with the back of his sleeve.
Dennel says ‘Delicious’
Maddy looks from Lord Dennel to Vala, ‘Vala, did you prepare this wonderful meal?’
Dennel says ‘Please eat. Plenty for everyone’
Vala says ‘No he brought some strange foods with him.’
Dennel appears to tear something from something and dip it in something before bringing it to his mouth.
Dennel says ‘Eat eat eat’
Dennel slowly begins the chew the air.
Vala looks around for some fish.
Maddy delicately picks a small morsel off the plate. Tasting it, her eyes open in delight ands she says ‘Delicious.’
Dennel stops what he is doing and suddenly stares at Vala.
Vala sits down on a bench.
Maddy watches Vala to see if she also enjoys the food.
Dennel says ‘And what have we learned here Accepted?’
Draz has arrived from the west, riding a dust-colored gelding.
Vala clambers to her feet.
Maddy beams a smile at Draz.
Dennel looks at Vala.
Dennel says ‘What have we learned here Accepted?’
Vala looks at Maddy.
Dennel says ‘Draz, please take a load off and join us in our meal.’
Draz says ‘What food is there?’
Dennel reaches to a non-existent table and grabs a handful of ?
Draz gets a plate of roast potatoes ad turnips from a wooden barrel.
Vala tastes a little bit of a hunk of beef.
Draz arches an eyebrow.
Draz looks at Dennel archly.
Dennel hands the something to Draz.
Dennel says ‘Eat’
Maddy stands up and dishes out Lord Draz a plate of his favorites.
Draz is too full to eat more!
Draz unbuttons his britches a little.
Draz nibbles at a plate of roast potatoes and turnips.
Dennel reaches out and grabs for himself what he imagines to be a bunch of grapes.
Vala tastes a little bit of a hunk of beef.
Draz quaffs a cup of thready tea.
Draz gasps in astonishment.
Draz gasps for breath.
Dennel slowly plucks grape after grape tossing them into his mouth.
Vala tastes a little bit of a hunk of beef.
Vala drinks stout ale from a mug.
Draz forces food towards his mouth, two handed, looking determined.
Maddy grabs a napkin from the elaborate table and delicately pats the corners of her mouth.
Dennel says ‘OK. Accepted, what have we learned?’
Dennel looks at Vala.
Maddy grabs the teapot and pours four cups saying ‘I will be the Mother today.’
Dennel winces about the situation.
Vala shrugs helplessly.
Maddy adds a lump of ? to each cup and passes them around.
Dennel says ‘People are idiots who will follow any old fool’
Dennel says ‘Don’t be a sheep’
Vala tastes a little bit of a hunk of beef.
Dennel nods to himself. He must need assurance.
Dennel waves away the non-existent table.
Maddy burps loudly.
Vala says ‘Don’t look at me, I had real food’
Dennel says ‘Well done’
Dennel peers at both Draz and Maddy and says ‘Pitiful.’
Maddy says ‘Draz and I enjoyed ours immensely.’
Dennel chuckles politely.
Maddy says ‘It’s how we keep our svelt figures’