The Dark One's Own Luck ---&RPAward
Posted: Mon Jan 29, 2024 9:50 am
Korsik edit Feb 21 2024:
1-8 qps, depending on length and quality.
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Part of a series +1 qps: x
Summary: +1 qps : o
Post 1: 2qps
Post 2: 3qps
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Was he dead? No, he wasn’t dead. Adran stirred under rubble which pinned him to the ground like an unkind lover. Not that Adran knew much of love. Not that he knew much of anything--a whisker past his eighteenth winter and the baby of his family, the only boy, Adran had been at turns spoiled and sheltered his entire life, which so far hadn’t amounted to much.
Adran’s eldest sister always said the boy possessed the Dark One’s own luck whenever he’d drop a stack of plates and none would break, when he’d roll the same pips over and over and over. Adran wasn’t sure if he believed in luck, but maybe the Light did shine on him: he’d survived this, after all.
And what was this? An explosion? An avalanche? He’d arrived in Tar Valon only hours before with a few marks in his belt pouch and not much else. He planned to announce himself at the White Tower, but only after finding a job and a place to stay. Maybe he’d join the Tower Guard. Burn him, but maybe he’d be a Warder someday!
Adran wanted to make his sister proud, and he wanted to punish her. How dare she not respond to his letters? He knew her training would keep her busy, but that didn’t mean you forgot about family. He’d spent years convincing himself of this last point, and now that he was so close to his goal, those convictions turned to ash in his mouth.
Adran was afraid.
And why shouldn’t he be? Perhaps he was stupid to come all this way. His sister clearly did not care if she did not write. What would she make of this sheepish, dirty boy showing up on the doorstep of her immaculate White Tower? Yes, Adran needed a job before he could look her in the eye. He needed a purpose.
That’s when he’d heard the commotion in the Square. Some prophet, crying of the Dragon Reborn. His words arrested Adran; they spoke to the center of the boy, to his secret self, and made the kind of sense for which a man might spend his whole life waiting.
Adran drifted closer, milling about in the periphery with the others who’d assembled to hear the prophet speak. One of the men with the prophet even gave Adran some gold. Light, but there were at least 20 marks! Maybe he would find a bed to sleep in tonight after all.
Adran tried to move closer when he saw the girl in the white dress with rainbows at her hemline. She was sort of pretty, and maybe she could help Adran find his sister. Then the ground began to quake, men, women and horses thrown into the air as if they were toys. Less than toys. Broken kindling.
Adran thought the Aes Sedai could not use the One Power to harm their enemies, and that was perhaps his last thought as his world came crashing down.
1-8 qps, depending on length and quality.
Rplizer +1 qps : o
Extra meticulous edit +1 qps : o
Length bonus +1-2 qps : o
Part of a series +1 qps: x
Summary: +1 qps : o
Post 1: 2qps
Post 2: 3qps
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Was he dead? No, he wasn’t dead. Adran stirred under rubble which pinned him to the ground like an unkind lover. Not that Adran knew much of love. Not that he knew much of anything--a whisker past his eighteenth winter and the baby of his family, the only boy, Adran had been at turns spoiled and sheltered his entire life, which so far hadn’t amounted to much.
Adran’s eldest sister always said the boy possessed the Dark One’s own luck whenever he’d drop a stack of plates and none would break, when he’d roll the same pips over and over and over. Adran wasn’t sure if he believed in luck, but maybe the Light did shine on him: he’d survived this, after all.
And what was this? An explosion? An avalanche? He’d arrived in Tar Valon only hours before with a few marks in his belt pouch and not much else. He planned to announce himself at the White Tower, but only after finding a job and a place to stay. Maybe he’d join the Tower Guard. Burn him, but maybe he’d be a Warder someday!
Adran wanted to make his sister proud, and he wanted to punish her. How dare she not respond to his letters? He knew her training would keep her busy, but that didn’t mean you forgot about family. He’d spent years convincing himself of this last point, and now that he was so close to his goal, those convictions turned to ash in his mouth.
Adran was afraid.
And why shouldn’t he be? Perhaps he was stupid to come all this way. His sister clearly did not care if she did not write. What would she make of this sheepish, dirty boy showing up on the doorstep of her immaculate White Tower? Yes, Adran needed a job before he could look her in the eye. He needed a purpose.
That’s when he’d heard the commotion in the Square. Some prophet, crying of the Dragon Reborn. His words arrested Adran; they spoke to the center of the boy, to his secret self, and made the kind of sense for which a man might spend his whole life waiting.
Adran drifted closer, milling about in the periphery with the others who’d assembled to hear the prophet speak. One of the men with the prophet even gave Adran some gold. Light, but there were at least 20 marks! Maybe he would find a bed to sleep in tonight after all.
Adran tried to move closer when he saw the girl in the white dress with rainbows at her hemline. She was sort of pretty, and maybe she could help Adran find his sister. Then the ground began to quake, men, women and horses thrown into the air as if they were toys. Less than toys. Broken kindling.
Adran thought the Aes Sedai could not use the One Power to harm their enemies, and that was perhaps his last thought as his world came crashing down.