An Illuminator comes within an inch of his life! ---&RPaward

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An Illuminator comes within an inch of his life! ---&RPaward

Post by Nyro » Tue May 31, 2022 11:51 pm

Ely edit 22 June 2022:

1-6 qps, depending on length and quality.

Rplizer +1 qps : x
Extra meticulous edit +1 qps : x
Length bonus +1-2 qps : o

Summary: +1 qps : x

Total: 5 qps, Penzei awarded also.

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Summary:
Nyro is innocently minding his own business after a recent show in Tar Valon, when he meets a friendly Accepted, is betrayed by his very own assistant, and bravely comes within an inch of his life when he submits to the Accepted's Healing, where his prior burn wounds are miraculously healed and he is able to go upon his merry way.

Edited via RPlizer, followed by manual edits for mob movement, typos, and miscellaneous spam.

Point of view: Nyro the intrepid Illuminator
Main character: Nyro (always!)
Main character: Penzei the Tower Accepted
Major participant: Teben, the traitorous Illuminator Assistant
Participant: Draghkar (though mesmerizing, was successfully killed by the Tower guard)


Tower Square
This side of the square is the southern section of the Tower Square.
In the center is the walled off White Tower. To the south a large
boulevard opens up leading to the Southharbor. To the north you see
the southern gate of the Tower grounds. The square continues east
and west.
A large banner rests here, depicting a map of Tar Valon.
[ obvious exits: N E S W ]
A mirrored lantern has been left here.
A thin sheet of paper lies crumpled on the ground.
A marble bench, flecked with gold and bronze, adorns the floor.
An oil lamp, set in a steel cage, hangs from a high wooden pole.
An elaborately sculpted marble fountain splashes merrily.
A stout wooden barrel stands nearby.
A Tower Guard watches for signs of trouble.
A keen eyed, sun-darkened man struts about here.
A Tower Guard watches for signs of trouble.
An avid Illuminator stands here gripping a pouch of black powder.
|1|.A gray palfrey prances skittishly nearby, being ridden by you.
The Tar Valon town crier stands here, spreading the news.

Penzei has arrived from the north.

Penzei leaves south.

Penzei has arrived from the south.

Nyro rubs his bare lip where his moustache used to be.

Penzei waves.

Nyro waves.

l penzei
An exceptionally petite girl stands here. Her copper hair is shiny and seems as if reflects the
light in the room. Despite her small stature her frame has muscular hints about it, as if she is
stronger than she looks.

Penzei is in excellent condition.

Penzei says 'Hello there Illuminator!'

Penzei giggles.

Nyro says 'Hello!'

A gray palfrey lays its ears flat against its neck.

Nyro says 'How are you today...'

Nyro glances at your dress.

Nyro says '...Accepted?'

Penzei says 'Another day another task '

Nyro says 'Those Aes Sedai workin' you to the bone, eh?'

The Tar Valon town crier beams a smile at Penzei.

Penzei says 'Certainly a full time job'

An avid Illuminator says 'Don't they always?'

Nyro nods in agreement.

The Tar Valon town crier beams a smile at Penzei.

Penzei eats a choice steak.
Nyro says 'What do they have you doing today?'

Penzei says 'oh I'm at the point where I sort of punch my own ticket and wait for Sitters and elder Aes Sedai to tell me what to do'

Nyro nods in agreement.

Nyro says 'I see!'

Nyro says 'And what vocation will you plan on seeking out as an aspiring Aes Sedai?'

Penzei says 'I am a proud apprentice to the Yellow Ajah'

Nyro rubs his arm and winces. pulling down his sleeve.
Penzei says 'Battlefield Healer at your service'

Penzei curtseys gracefully.

Nyro says 'Ah! A good choice.'

Nyro says 'I hear they're well-loved for their skills aiding the wounded in battle.'

Penzei says 'We work a mite quicker than the wisdoms without all that... foul concoctions...'

Nyro nods in agreement.

Nyro 's eyes grow distant as he makes a face.

Nyro says 'I remember my last Wisdom encounter all too well...'

Penzei giggles.

Nyro dips a cloth in the cool water of the fountain and wraps it around his forearm, tucking it under his sleeve.

The sun casts a golden glow over the city.

drink water
Nyro drinks the water.
Nyro doesn't feel thirsty any more.

Penzei says 'whats wrong with your arm illuminator ?'

Nyro glances at his other arm and waves it about.

Penzei crossing her arms before her while swishing her copper hair behind her back.

Nyro says 'Why, nothing at all!'

Penzei rolls her eyes...sheesh!..

Penzei says 'Give it here...'

Nyro shows you his clearly uninjured right arm.

The day has begun.

Nyro says 'See?'

A city lamplighter extinguishes a streetlamp.

Nyro casually hides his left arm behind his back.

Penzei says 'Come on now, let me have a look at it! '

Penzei starts poking you in the floating rib.

Nyro darts behind his horse.

Nyro winces and calls out 'Nothing wrong at all!'

An avid Illuminator says 'Nyro is quite squeamish around healers.'

Nyro frowns.

Penzei blurts out, " Oh no ! A shadowspawn! " and points toward the tower.

Nyro spins and gapes up at the tower.

Nyro says '...Where??'

Penzei snatches your left arm and immediately begins inspecting it.

Nyro gasps in astonishment.

Nyro wiggles as the avid Illuminator assistant assists Penzei.

Penzei giggles.

glare Teben
Nyro glares icily at him.

Nyro says 'Traitor!'

An avid Illuminator says 'HE burned his arm earlier today while performing...'

An avid Illuminator rolls his eyes...sheesh!..

An avid Illuminator says 'he's too proud to seek help, the woolheaded fellow.'

glare teben
Nyro glares icily at him.

Penzei says 'Well well, but of course an illuminator showing off for the crowd... who would have thought...'

Penzei giggles.

Penzei continues to prod your arm.

Nyro sulks as he continues to squirm.

Nyro winces.

Nyro says 'Ow ow!'

Nyro says 'You're killing me!!'

Penzei giggles.

Nyro bellows 'Help! Help!'

Penzei says 'Okay okay... do you want me to fix it or what'

Nyro bellows 'I'm being assaulted! Penzei is trying to take me arm off!'

Penzei giggles.

An avid Illuminator says 'Best if you do so the complainer stops his whining.'

Nyro sulks.

Penzei says 'Tsk tsk, I do need his express permission'

Penzei giggles.

Nyro says 'It's fine, really!'

Nyro peeks at his arm and grimaces.

Nyro shudders.

Penzei says 'Sure that’s why you acted like I was torturing you when I was merely examining you.'

Penzei giggles.

Nyro bursts into tears.

An avid Illuminator rolls his eyes...sheesh!..

An avid Illuminator says 'You should have seen him when the Wisdom took a look at him!'

An avid Illuminator rolls his eyes...sheesh!..

Nyro sighs.

Penzei says 'Well I don't blame you there...'

Penzei says 'would only take me ooooo 20 seconds or so to fix this'

Nyro says 'Fiiiine, do your worst and take your pound of flesh you butcher!'

Penzei giggles.

Nyro mutters 'I'll be lucky to still have an arm after this!'

Nyro grumbles.

Penzei closes her eyes and breaths deeply without doing anything for a moment.

Nyro tenses.

Penzei says 'Hold your arm out'

Nyro holds out his left arm and closes his eyes.

A mesmerising crooning sound can be heard as a winged humanoid figure glides up above the city.

The screeching deathcry of a Draghkar rings out as an archer's arrow finds its mark.

Nyro moans 'Tell my uncle... I forgive him, if I don't make it through this!'

An avid Illuminator says 'Tell him yourself you big baby.'

Penzei raises her arms before her slowly beginning to swirl them back and forth... white wisps of seemingly smoke start to form and coalesce into bluish glowing water...

Nyro trembles slightly.

Nyro eyes the smoke with trepidation.

Penzei continues to concentrate her efforts closer to your arm... a brown dirt combines with the water making it glow green... the substance then washes over the burn and begins to wipe it away... like it was never there at all...

Penzei exhales as the weave completes and the smoke and glowing fades away like nothing ever happened...

Nyro examines his arm, flexing his hand.

Nyro sighs.

Nyro says 'Well.'

Penzei says 'There, isn't that better ?'

Penzei giggles.

Nyro says 'That wasn't so bad.'

Nyro says 'I knew it would work fine.'

Nyro nods to himself. Very reassuring.

An avid Illuminator rolls his eyes...sheesh!..

Nyro says 'See Teben? That wasn't bad at all!'

Nyro puffs out his chest.

Nyro says 'Why, to think Teben here was all worried!'

Nyro claps him on the back.

Penzei says 'You know what they say... if you got a tummy ache... find a wisdom... if you've got a wound yell for a Yellow!'

The sun sets, washing the city in fiery colors.

An avid Illuminator peers closely at Nyro; he should guard his secrets carefully...

Nyro nods in agreement.

Nyro leans in conspiratorily.

Nyro whispers loudly 'You know, Teben here gets squeamish around healers.'

Nyro whispers loudly 'Not like me!'

Penzei blurts out into laughter.

Nyro blinks his eyes innocently.

The night has begun.

Nyro pats an avid Illuminator on his head.

Penzei says 'Well... good sir, my duty calls!'

Nyro says 'Well thank you, Accepted. You are a credit to your apprenticeship.'

Penzei giggles.

Nyro bows grandly.

Penzei says 'Thank you'

Penzei winks suggestively at Nyro.

Penzei curtseys gracefully.

Penzei blows you a kiss as she runs off towards the stables.

Nyro's cheeks are burning.


Bragar
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Re: An Illuminator comes within an inch of his life!

Post by Bragar » Wed Jun 01, 2022 6:38 pm

Love the rp with your mob. Well done. Please give negative qps though for being an illuminator.

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