* R HP:Healthy MV:Full >
The bark docks at Falme in a fluid motion.
* R HP:Healthy MV:Full > look
Aboard the Red Herring
A strong and sturdy boat, this three-masted bark has sufficient
accommodation for a large amount of people and cargo and the ability to
sustain them for a longer journey. Although judging from the rigging and
sails it is not originally a Seanchan vessel, it now serves the Empire. A
skiff is hanging in brackets on the starboard side.
[ obvious exits: ]
Talroc the Officer is standing here.
|1|.A warhorse is here, stamping his feet impatiently, being ridden by you.
A captain stands here, giving orders.
This is the boat from Tremalking to Falme.
Should probably be:
The boat docks at Falme in a fluid motion.
Re: Typos
Moderator: Aureus
Re: Typos
Tanchico Road zone: Old entrance to Elmora cutoff.
Bend in the Path
The path turns slightly to the south-west due to the thick population of
trees, bushes and other plants growing in the south. The path continues to
the west and north, but a recently cut trail to the east pushes into the
Tarabon woodlands.
[ obvious exits: N W ]
Since the connection with the zone to the east is now gone the bold portion above should be adjusted or removed.
Bend in the Path
The path turns slightly to the south-west due to the thick population of
trees, bushes and other plants growing in the south. The path continues to
the west and north, but a recently cut trail to the east pushes into the
Tarabon woodlands.
[ obvious exits: N W ]
Since the connection with the zone to the east is now gone the bold portion above should be adjusted or removed.
Re: Typos
l traitor
Having survived thus far by burrowing into the clay cliffs like a common
animal, this traitor is caked in many layers of reddish yellow clay. It is
impossible to tell what color his clothes are, and his hair stands up in
clay caked spiked dreadlocks that stand in all directions. A tatoo on the
back of his hands show a raven with its neck broken, a symbol of a
resistance pod against the ruling Seanchan house.
A nasty traitor is in excellent condition.
a nasty traitor is using:
<worn about body> a torn cloak (frayed)
<wielded> a tarnished shortsword
<worn on feet> a pair of heavy leather boots
Fixed.
Having survived thus far by burrowing into the clay cliffs like a common
animal, this traitor is caked in many layers of reddish yellow clay. It is
impossible to tell what color his clothes are, and his hair stands up in
clay caked spiked dreadlocks that stand in all directions. A tatoo on the
back of his hands show a raven with its neck broken, a symbol of a
resistance pod against the ruling Seanchan house.
A nasty traitor is in excellent condition.
a nasty traitor is using:
<worn about body> a torn cloak (frayed)
<wielded> a tarnished shortsword
<worn on feet> a pair of heavy leather boots
Fixed.
Re: Typos
Mayene Road Through the Valley
A narrow strip of open land between the ocean and a cluster of building
serves as the only way through this part of the valley, and this is the
path the road follows south towards a small village and north across the
peninsula. Rolling hills rise some distance to the north while the
peninsula ends in high cliffs even further south of the valley.
[ obvious exits: N S ]
There are some tracks of a ridden mount leaving vvsouthvv
There are some tracks of a ridden mount leaving ^^north^^
A squat border stone juts from the soil.
* R HP:Healthy MV:Weary > look stone
The golden hawk of Mayene faces southward, while the northern face it heavily pitted and scarred.
(am assuming it should be is instead of it!)
Itesh Edit: Should be fixed now.
A narrow strip of open land between the ocean and a cluster of building
serves as the only way through this part of the valley, and this is the
path the road follows south towards a small village and north across the
peninsula. Rolling hills rise some distance to the north while the
peninsula ends in high cliffs even further south of the valley.
[ obvious exits: N S ]
There are some tracks of a ridden mount leaving vvsouthvv
There are some tracks of a ridden mount leaving ^^north^^
A squat border stone juts from the soil.
* R HP:Healthy MV:Weary > look stone
The golden hawk of Mayene faces southward, while the northern face it heavily pitted and scarred.
(am assuming it should be is instead of it!)
Itesh Edit: Should be fixed now.
Last edited by Itesh on Mon Jul 31, 2017 6:34 am, edited 1 time in total.
Reason: Fixed.
Reason: Fixed.
Re: Typos
Skywalk over the Inner City
You are at the southern end of a long marble skywalk that runs over the
Inner City of Caemlyn. A spiraling stairwell leads down into the heart of
the Outer City. You can see a great deal of Caemlyn from this vantage
point, and the view is simply spectacular. The number of people that
populate this huge city is beyond all belief. The walkway continues to the
north. To the west, a rooftop stretches to the sky before falling stopping
a span or two away from the marbled skywalk.
[ obvious exits: N D ]
Just seemed like a weird reading where those two words are bolded. Perhaps a comma in between?
Alternatively, if I'm not mistaken it seems this room desc got changed a bit for someone's master quest recently and wasn't fixed back?
Fixed.
You are at the southern end of a long marble skywalk that runs over the
Inner City of Caemlyn. A spiraling stairwell leads down into the heart of
the Outer City. You can see a great deal of Caemlyn from this vantage
point, and the view is simply spectacular. The number of people that
populate this huge city is beyond all belief. The walkway continues to the
north. To the west, a rooftop stretches to the sky before falling stopping
a span or two away from the marbled skywalk.
[ obvious exits: N D ]
Just seemed like a weird reading where those two words are bolded. Perhaps a comma in between?
Alternatively, if I'm not mistaken it seems this room desc got changed a bit for someone's master quest recently and wasn't fixed back?
Fixed.
Re: Typos
* HP:Healthy SP:Bursting MV:Full > l
Small Cottage
A fireplace made out of round river stones dominates this cosy room. Two
chairs have been drawn up to the fireplace and a small table stands next to
the chairs, ready to hold beverages, books or perhaps some knitting. A
painting of a woman hangs over the fireplace. Windows look out over the
extensive rose garden outside the cottage.
[ obvious exits: N E ]
* HP:Healthy SP:Bursting MV:Full > l painting
This painting depicts a strikingly handsome woman. Despite what must be her
considerable age and power she posseses an attractive quality. Her
iron-gray hair is pulled back into a severe bun, held back by clips
supporting golden ornaments. This woman exudes power. The painting stares
back at you coolky. A very young woman sits by the elder woman's side,
wearing a dress that seems oddly out of fashion.
* HP:Healthy SP:Bursting MV:Full >
Small Cottage
A fireplace made out of round river stones dominates this cosy room. Two
chairs have been drawn up to the fireplace and a small table stands next to
the chairs, ready to hold beverages, books or perhaps some knitting. A
painting of a woman hangs over the fireplace. Windows look out over the
extensive rose garden outside the cottage.
[ obvious exits: N E ]
* HP:Healthy SP:Bursting MV:Full > l painting
This painting depicts a strikingly handsome woman. Despite what must be her
considerable age and power she posseses an attractive quality. Her
iron-gray hair is pulled back into a severe bun, held back by clips
supporting golden ornaments. This woman exudes power. The painting stares
back at you coolky. A very young woman sits by the elder woman's side,
wearing a dress that seems oddly out of fashion.
* HP:Healthy SP:Bursting MV:Full >
Last edited by Cynthiel on Thu Aug 31, 2017 10:42 pm, edited 1 time in total.
Reason: Fixed cosy and posseses. Someone else got to coolky first. :)
Reason: Fixed cosy and posseses. Someone else got to coolky first. :)
Re: Typos
While reading through the new quests at Lelaine:
Lelaine Akashi says 'Task 10:'
* HP:Healthy SP:Bursting MV:Fresh >
Lelaine Akashi says 'We should strengthen our ties to the Ogier in case we need their masonry skills.
Visit the Stedding and see if they need your service.'
* HP:Healthy SP:Bursting MV:Fresh >
Lelaine Akashi says 'Task 10:'
* HP:Healthy SP:Bursting MV:Fresh >
Lelaine Akashi says 'I'm looking for a statuette of Artur Hawkwing. Perhaps Sarita the antiques
dealer can help you locate one.'
Should read Task 10 and Task 11.
Lelaine Akashi says 'Task 10:'
* HP:Healthy SP:Bursting MV:Fresh >
Lelaine Akashi says 'We should strengthen our ties to the Ogier in case we need their masonry skills.
Visit the Stedding and see if they need your service.'
* HP:Healthy SP:Bursting MV:Fresh >
Lelaine Akashi says 'Task 10:'
* HP:Healthy SP:Bursting MV:Fresh >
Lelaine Akashi says 'I'm looking for a statuette of Artur Hawkwing. Perhaps Sarita the antiques
dealer can help you locate one.'
Should read Task 10 and Task 11.
Last edited by Cynthiel on Thu Aug 31, 2017 10:43 pm, edited 1 time in total.
Reason: Fixed
Reason: Fixed