Next thing you'll know, they'll try and rename all of the "Armour" Shops!!
Re: Typos
Moderator: Aureus
Re: Typos
I genuinely had no idea that was an Americanism! Apologies
Re: Typos
3n Tower Square:
Something seems wonky here... but either way that second 'fluted column' should be plural.A Large Entrance Hall
Archways almost surround the large round entrance hall with its flat-domed
ceiling. The pale stone floor has been worn and polished by countless
nervous feet over the centuries. A marble frieze decorated in elaborate
vines and leaves runs along the walls deeper into the Tower. Fluted columns
runs along the walls deeper into the Tower. Fluted column
rise from the floor by the walls and reach to the twenty pace high ceiling.
Last edited by Elysia on Thu Jun 04, 2020 8:37 pm, edited 1 time in total.
Reason: Fixed with Tower change.
Reason: Fixed with Tower change.
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And it should be run in the first sentence. I'd suggest merging the sentences like: 'Fluted columns rise twenty paces from the floor to support the high ceiling, running along the walls deeper into the Tower.'
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Reason: Fixed with Tower change.
Reason: Fixed with Tower change.
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The Turquoise Lake
Smooth green-blue waters of the lake lap gently against the black and gray
rocks on the shore to the south and west. A small fast-moving stream fills
the lake with oxygenated water, allowing the fish and other aquatic wild
life to develop and grow. Some water [b]lillies[/b] and clumps of [b]reads[/b] grow near
the banks of the lake.
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The Quiet Green Waters
The waters of the lake go all around the small island to the west. The
surface of the pool is calm and the color of the water a green-blue. The
water deepens to the south where it is a little darker in color. Reeds and
water lillies grow at the edge of the pond on the western bank
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Shrubs on a Green Sloping Hill
The green foliage of the canopy over head, provided by the trees affords
protection from the wind and rain. Thich green wiry moss covers the roots
of the trees and most of the shaded area under the main trunk. In places
the smooth sandstone or black granite can be seen to stick up from under
the ground level fauna.
The green foliage of the canopy over head, provided by the trees affords
protection from the wind and rain. Thich green wiry moss covers the roots
of the trees and most of the shaded area under the main trunk. In places
the smooth sandstone or black granite can be seen to stick up from under
the ground level fauna.
Last edited by Elysia on Thu Jun 04, 2020 8:44 pm, edited 1 time in total.
Reason: Fixed.
Reason: Fixed.
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The Grassy Ridge
A solitary chestnut tree stands above the birch and maples which are
scattered across the wooded ridge. Under the chestnut several of its
produce can be seen lying in the dry soil. The top of the tree is often
covered with large hand shaped leaves. A large bird's nest can be seen
perched precariously near the top of the towering giant tree.
[ obvious exits: E S ]
Zone: The Dry Forest
A Tairen destrier barded in black and gold stands here, being ridden by you.
* R HP:Wounded MV:Fresh >
l nest
Twigs and small branches are collected together and form a large platelike
arrangement. Pigeons continue to use the nest when they are have eggs or
young to rear.
A solitary chestnut tree stands above the birch and maples which are
scattered across the wooded ridge. Under the chestnut several of its
produce can be seen lying in the dry soil. The top of the tree is often
covered with large hand shaped leaves. A large bird's nest can be seen
perched precariously near the top of the towering giant tree.
[ obvious exits: E S ]
Zone: The Dry Forest
A Tairen destrier barded in black and gold stands here, being ridden by you.
* R HP:Wounded MV:Fresh >
l nest
Twigs and small branches are collected together and form a large platelike
arrangement. Pigeons continue to use the nest when they are have eggs or
young to rear.
Last edited by Elysia on Thu Jun 04, 2020 8:51 pm, edited 1 time in total.
Reason: Fixed.
Reason: Fixed.
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Re: Typos
Didn't really want to make a whole new thread; not to be too Millennial about this or whatnot but can we change the following:
?A slant-eyed sentry keeps vigilant watch here.
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Reason: Many mobs with these types of descriptions were changed. If you find one, it's probably unintended.
Reason: Many mobs with these types of descriptions were changed. If you find one, it's probably unintended.