Re: Typos

Post by **Drogba** » Wed Jan 04, 2023 6:07 pm

Lot of these lines where sentence just randomly ends

A huge lumbering trolloc enters the room and empties the contents of his sack into sentence ends abruptly

o S HP:Healthy MV:Fresh >
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A Darkened Pit
The bedrock has been shredded and torn away in a long tunnel shape that
slants into the the earth, creating this small area. Claw marks gouge the
walls on all sides and the floor is pocketed with countless sets of great
paw prints embedded into the solid rock itself. At the very end of the
tunnel the ground is worn into smooth depressions where massive bodies have
lain in slumber. A charred pit seems to have been recently dug here, and
scraps of rations, weapons and equipment lie in the bottom.

A six-sided dice lies on the ground.
[ obvious exits: E ]

Post by **Drogba** » Wed Jan 04, 2023 6:13 pm

and on the other side

A Fetid Pit
[ obvious exits: N ]
Zone: The Ruined Keep
A mirrored lantern has been left here. [4]
A chunk of sandstone lies on the ground. [3]
A slip of paper has been carelessly dropped upon the ground. [2]
A plate of tasty looking pork steams here. [2]
A plate of tasty looking pork steams here.
A plate of tasty looking pork steams here.
A plate of tasty looking pork steams here.

o S HP:Healthy MV:Tiring >
say donate
You say 'donate'

o S HP:Healthy MV:Tiring >

A huge lumbering trolloc steps from the shadows, puts as much as he can carry in a large text cuts off again here

Maisha · Post by **Maisha** » Wed May 10, 2023 10:15 pm

Outside the KMG guild hall if you try to enter with less than 65% hps

65% HP required to enter the Guidhall instead of NO-QUIT check

should be Guildhall

davee · Post by **davee** » Sat May 20, 2023 9:38 pm

bandit guard, but he deflects the blow.
A burly bandit guard tries to lance you, but you deflect the blow.
The Forested Valley
The smooth bark of the Cyprus trees
cypress is how you spell these trees

Atrayis · Post by **Atrayis** » Wed May 24, 2023 5:41 pm

1S FD Clerk, missing a "t" and period.

* HP:Hurt MV:Tiring > Upper Hall
[ obvious exits: N E W ]

* HP:Hurt MV:Tiring >
The library door closes quiely

Sanguine · Post by **Sanguine** » Mon Jul 24, 2023 8:01 pm

* N HP:Healthy SP:Bursting MV:Fresh > mend sword
You sit down.
You begin mending a feathered Kandori paramerion.

You see the edges of a feathered Kandori paramerion sharpen further...

You begin finishing off the edges of a feathered Kandori paramerion...

You begin finishing off the edges of a feathered Kandori paramerion...

You finish mending a feathered Kandori paramerion...

How do you begin the same task twice...?

Dixon · Post by **Dixon** » Fri Oct 06, 2023 3:34 pm

The gate guard looks at you and whispers, 'If you'd like to send the equipment in the barrel to Caemlyn, say "donate please."

This is at Malk and it should say rack and not barrel since there is no barrel there?

Post by **Asandra** » Sat Oct 07, 2023 6:40 am

It goes to the barrel in Caemlyn

Dixon · Post by **Dixon** » Sat Oct 07, 2023 9:35 am

Ok? It's saying IN the barrel, not TO the barrel.

Post by **Asandra** » Sat Oct 07, 2023 11:46 am

Should say to yes!