Re: Typos
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Re: Typos
The roc in GF has the wrong it's/its
This bird is simply enormous. It is at least as large as a three
story building. How anything so monstrously large can possibly
exist is simply mind-boggling. It's daily meal probably includes
several large animals.
This bird is simply enormous. It is at least as large as a three
story building. How anything so monstrously large can possibly
exist is simply mind-boggling. It's daily meal probably includes
several large animals.
Last edited by Elysia on Fri Nov 08, 2019 10:52 am, edited 1 time in total.
Reason: Fixed.
Reason: Fixed.
Re: Typos
Not sure what's wrong with that?Taziar wrote: ↑Sat Sep 07, 2019 3:08 pmLast sentence: showing troop deployments and supply- and messenger lines.Cairhien War Office
This chamber is a prime example of military chaotic efficiency. Several
tables stand in the room, each with its own purpose. A table in the corner
bears refreshments, while against the wall a desk stands at the ready for
any missives to be written. A chandelier bearing many mirrored candles
hangs above a massive table which is covered with maps in various sizes,
showing troop deployments and supply- and messenger lines.
[ obvious exits: W ]
Re: Typos
Not necessarily:Thuvia wrote: ↑Fri Sep 13, 2019 4:30 pmZone: Andoran Countryside East
Room: Fast Moving River
Mob: a silvery fish
* HP:Healthy MV:Full > con fish
Well, it is taller than you, lighter than you, and in general less stocky than you.
You could do it with a needle!
* HP:Healthy MV:Fresh > stat
You are a 18 year old male human warrior.
Your height is 5 feet, 11 inches, and you weigh 187.0 lbs.
I think some lake trout can get to Maybe ~50 inches, but this guy seems a bit big.
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wels_catfish
It might be that the desc doesn't reflect it's that type of fish, but there are giant freshwater fish out there.
Re: Typos
As a random observation, I have not fixed the mobs with missing descs. Writing mob descs is probably the worst part about imming, because there are only so many different types of men and women and at some point you just don't bother. It's like writing a whole zone of basement.
Re: Typos
there is a dash after the word supply, and and and... too many ands?Elysia wrote: ↑Fri Nov 08, 2019 10:20 amNot sure what's wrong with that?Taziar wrote: ↑Sat Sep 07, 2019 3:08 pmLast sentence: showing troop deployments and supply- and messenger lines.Cairhien War Office
This chamber is a prime example of military chaotic efficiency. Several
tables stand in the room, each with its own purpose. A table in the corner
bears refreshments, while against the wall a desk stands at the ready for
any missives to be written. A chandelier bearing many mirrored candles
hangs above a massive table which is covered with maps in various sizes,
showing troop deployments and supply- and messenger lines.
[ obvious exits: W ]
Possible solution:
would have to remove the comma at the end of the sentence above that though.showing troop deployments, supply routes, and messenger lines.
The main thing was the random dash typo after the word supply
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