Re: Typos

[azareth]

Upstairs Bedroom
The upstairs bedroom is decorated in the same overly fashion as the rest of
the house, gold and silver dominate the colors, but a few colorful
paintings line the walls as well as the large quilt covering the bed adds a
woman's touch to the room. By looking through the window you can see sandy
shoals breaking the surface of the Sea of Storms.
[ obvious exits: D ]
Zone: Mayene Peninsula
Down: A poor, solemn villager walks by.
A stealthy cougar gracefully makes its way through the terrain.

I can't tell what that first sentence is supposed to be

[Pugbert]

Upstairs Bedroom
The upstairs bedroom is decorated in the same overtly fashion as the rest of
the house. Gold and silver dominate the colors, but a few colorful
paintings line the walls and a large quilt covers the bed adding a woman's
touch to the room. The central window provides a view of the sandy
shoals breaking the surface of the Sea of Storms.
[ obvious exits: D ]
Zone: Mayene Peninsula
Down: A poor, solemn villager walks by.
A stealthy cougar gracefully makes its way through the terrain.

I can't tell what that first sentence is supposed to be

would help of 'overtly' was spelt correctly methinks. Would also help if the run-on sentence was split into two sane sentences and the tenses changed to match each other in the latter part. Probably also best to rework the prepositional phrase starting the last sentence too. Corrects made in the quote.

looks like something written by somebody running on 3 hours of sleep and 3 litres of coffee.

[Mykael]

Capital "A" in item description mistakenly used for Wall Guard abs helmet re-tool ("A black steel bascinet with a thin gold plume"). Should be a lowercase "a" per convetion (*I think*).

You are using:
<used as light> a mirrored lantern
<held> an oilskin bag
<worn on finger> a gold ring delicately carved with ivy
<worn on finger> a gold ring delicately carved with ivy
<worn on head> A black steel bascinet with a thin gold plume
<worn around neck> a torc of gleaming steel
<worn around neck> a torc of gleaming steel
<worn on body> a black steel cuirass etched with a golden fist
<worn about body> a fine black coat of silk
<slung on back> a backpack
<worn on arms> a pair of black steel vambraces etched in gold
<worn on hands> a thick pair of gold-plated gauntlets
<worn around wrist> a sungwood bracelet
<worn around wrist> a sungwood bracelet
<wielded two-handed> a great claymore (scratched)
<worn about waist> a bronze belt of odd design
<worn on belt> a shiny copper dagger
<worn on belt> a sword sheath
<worn on legs> a pair of black steel greaves etched in gold
<worn on feet> a pair of black steel boots with gold-capped toes

[Artorias]

Yandar Path
[ obvious exits: N S ]
There are some tracks of a ridden mount leaving south.
There are some tracks of a ridden mount leaving south.
A warhorse is here, stamping his feet impatiently, being ridden by you.
Lord Badd the Sheriff is standing here, riding a dust-colored gelding.
You feel an icy chill as if you plunged into a cold river.


should be "you are plunged" or were plunged right?

[Amarea]

I am not sure if this item loads anywhere else, but I found "a mug of milk of milk" loading in a few shops in Far Madding today:

The Swaggering Coxswain Tavern
[ obvious exits: E W ]
Zone: Far Madding North
Door west: backdoor
A copper tap with free ale is here.
Weary and coated in dust, a merchant stands here.
A shifty looking man stands in the shadows.
A merchant guard eyes you warily, intent on keeping order.
A merchant guard eyes you warily, intent on keeping order.
A young, pretty lady stands here tending the bar.

* HP:Healthy SP:Bursting MV:Full >
list
You can buy:
A glass of spiced wine of mulled wine for 1 copper.
A mutton shank for 13 coppers.
A wooden goblet of mulled wine for 6 coppers.
A cinnamon honeycake for 3 coppers.
A choice steak for 19 coppers.
A chunk of cheese for 2 coppers.
A mug of stout ale for 6 coppers.
A dented tankard of dark beer for 4 coppers.
A basted turkey leg for 4 coppers.
A basted turkey leg for 4 coppers.
A thick hunk of peppered beef for 9 coppers.
A thick hunk of peppered beef for 9 coppers.
A mug of milk of milk for 3 coppers.
A mug of milk of milk for 3 coppers.
A mug of stout ale for 6 coppers.
A mug of stout ale for 6 coppers.
A glass of spiced wine of mulled wine for 1 copper.

The Three Ladies of Maredo Inn
[ obvious exits: W ]
Zone: Far Madding North
A merchant guard eyes you warily, intent on keeping order.
A merchant guard eyes you warily, intent on keeping order.
A young, pretty lady stands here tending the bar.

* HP:Healthy SP:Bursting MV:Full >
list
You can buy:
A glass of spiced wine of mulled wine for 1 copper.
A mutton shank for 13 coppers.
A wooden goblet of mulled wine for 6 coppers.
A cinnamon honeycake for 3 coppers.
A choice steak for 19 coppers.
A chunk of cheese for 2 coppers.
A mug of stout ale for 6 coppers.
A dented tankard of dark beer for 4 coppers.
A basted turkey leg for 4 coppers.
A basted turkey leg for 4 coppers.
A thick hunk of peppered beef for 9 coppers.
A thick hunk of peppered beef for 9 coppers.
A mug of milk of milk for 3 coppers.
A mug of milk of milk for 3 coppers.
A mug of stout ale for 6 coppers.
A mug of stout ale for 6 coppers.
A glass of spiced wine of mulled wine for 1 copper.