This is fine as is.little pock marks where softer material have given way to constant aerial assault
Re: Typos
Moderator: Aureus
Re: Typos
You slash a Child of Light soldier 's left leg extremely hard.
A Child of Light soldier barely tickles a Dha'vol trolloc's right leg with his pierce.
A Dha'vol trolloc tries to slice a Child of the Light Hundredman, but he deflects the blow.
A Dha'vol trolloc slices a Child of Light soldier 's left leg extremely hard.
A Child of the Light Hundredman tickles a Dha'vol trolloc's body with his slash.
I think this has an extra space or so in it's name!
Fixed.
A Child of Light soldier barely tickles a Dha'vol trolloc's right leg with his pierce.
A Dha'vol trolloc tries to slice a Child of the Light Hundredman, but he deflects the blow.
A Dha'vol trolloc slices a Child of Light soldier 's left leg extremely hard.
A Child of the Light Hundredman tickles a Dha'vol trolloc's body with his slash.
I think this has an extra space or so in it's name!
Fixed.
Re: Typos
* HP:Hurt MV:Strong > A Small Hovel
This small cottage appears to be the home of a poor vagabond with little
in the way of possesions. The rooms only contents are a rickety table and
chair, a cot strung in one corner and an old tin washbasin. Into the
unplastered west wall of the room is a small fireplace so full of ashes it
must not have been cleaned out in ages. A small glassless window gazes out
north over a wide gully to the rolling plains beyond. An opening to the east
leads outside this hovel.
[ obvious exits: E ]
The corpse of a skeletal wolf is lying here.
A brown cow is here, chewing thoughtfully.
An elk with massive antlers eyes you with curiosity.
A long-eared rabbit is here, looking quite sick.
An old, nasty-mouthed man curses you for treading on his land.
A warhorse has arrived from the east.
* HP:Hurt MV:Strong >
A hermit says 'Here, take this. I'm happy enough to have a hammer.'
The hermit disappears around the hovel and you hear the clanging of
There's no end to the sentence. Hermit west of Whitebridge.
This small cottage appears to be the home of a poor vagabond with little
in the way of possesions. The rooms only contents are a rickety table and
chair, a cot strung in one corner and an old tin washbasin. Into the
unplastered west wall of the room is a small fireplace so full of ashes it
must not have been cleaned out in ages. A small glassless window gazes out
north over a wide gully to the rolling plains beyond. An opening to the east
leads outside this hovel.
[ obvious exits: E ]
The corpse of a skeletal wolf is lying here.
A brown cow is here, chewing thoughtfully.
An elk with massive antlers eyes you with curiosity.
A long-eared rabbit is here, looking quite sick.
An old, nasty-mouthed man curses you for treading on his land.
A warhorse has arrived from the east.
* HP:Hurt MV:Strong >
A hermit says 'Here, take this. I'm happy enough to have a hammer.'
The hermit disappears around the hovel and you hear the clanging of
There's no end to the sentence. Hermit west of Whitebridge.
Last edited by Elysia on Wed Jan 03, 2018 9:34 am, edited 1 time in total.
Reason: Fixed.
Reason: Fixed.
Re: Typos
Twisted Trees
Stunted, twisted trees are scattered across this area of the forest. Some are
so deformed that it is amazing they still stand. Their bloated, well-proportioned felid leaves
have all fallen to the ground and formed a sickening carpet of death and decay.
Beneath the rotten leaves, the soil is muddy and sticks to everything.
[ obvious exits: N E ]
I'm not sure if i'm that drunk, or that really says that in room desc. Puffy?!
Stunted, twisted trees are scattered across this area of the forest. Some are
so deformed that it is amazing they still stand. Their bloated, well-proportioned felid leaves
have all fallen to the ground and formed a sickening carpet of death and decay.
Beneath the rotten leaves, the soil is muddy and sticks to everything.
[ obvious exits: N E ]
I'm not sure if i'm that drunk, or that really says that in room desc. Puffy?!
Re: Typos
I can't believe I'm posting this...
https://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/well-proportioned felid
https://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/well-proportioned felid
Re: Typos
Haha, ok so it was not meant to be puffy, got it. Astolfo you speak at that level still guy.Elysia wrote:I can't believe I'm posting this...
https://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/well-proportioned felid
Re: Typos
Cuts like a knife!Shimu wrote:Haha, ok so it was not meant to be puffy, got it. Astolfo you speak at that level still guy.Elysia wrote:I can't believe I'm posting this...
https://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/well-proportioned felid