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Re: Typos
Posted: Sat Oct 26, 2019 1:25 pm
by Raefnal
The roc in GF has the wrong it's/its
This bird is simply enormous. It is at least as large as a three
story building. How anything so monstrously large can possibly
exist is simply mind-boggling. It's daily meal probably includes
several large animals.
Re: Typos
Posted: Sat Oct 26, 2019 10:39 pm
by Khahliana
A plains man chats 'My goat will win that.'
Should be plainsman
Re: Typos
Posted: Fri Nov 08, 2019 10:20 am
by Elysia
Taziar wrote: ↑Sat Sep 07, 2019 3:08 pm
Cairhien War Office
This chamber is a prime example of military chaotic efficiency. Several
tables stand in the room, each with its own purpose. A table in the corner
bears refreshments, while against the wall a desk stands at the ready for
any missives to be written. A chandelier bearing many mirrored candles
hangs above a massive table which is covered with maps in various sizes,
showing troop deployments and supply- and messenger lines.
[ obvious exits: W ]
Last sentence:
showing troop deployments and supply- and messenger lines.
Not sure what's wrong with that?
Re: Typos
Posted: Fri Nov 08, 2019 10:32 am
by Elysia
Thuvia wrote: ↑Fri Sep 13, 2019 4:30 pm
Zone: Andoran Countryside East
Room: Fast Moving River
Mob: a silvery fish
* HP:Healthy MV:Full > con fish
Well, it is
taller than you, lighter than you, and in general less stocky than you.
You could do it with a needle!
* HP:Healthy MV:Fresh > stat
You are a 18 year old male human warrior.
Your height is 5 feet, 11 inches, and you weigh 187.0 lbs.
I think some lake trout can get to Maybe ~50 inches, but this guy seems a bit big.
Not necessarily:
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wels_catfish
It might be that the desc doesn't reflect it's that type of fish, but there are giant freshwater fish out there.
Re: Typos
Posted: Fri Nov 08, 2019 10:54 am
by Elysia
As a random observation, I have not fixed the mobs with missing descs. Writing mob descs is probably the worst part about imming, because there are only so many different types of men and women and at some point you just don't bother. It's like writing a whole zone of basement.
Re: Typos
Posted: Sat Nov 09, 2019 3:15 am
by Sanguine
#basementlivesmatter
Re: Typos
Posted: Sat Nov 09, 2019 1:41 pm
by Taziar
Elysia wrote: ↑Fri Nov 08, 2019 10:20 am
Taziar wrote: ↑Sat Sep 07, 2019 3:08 pm
Cairhien War Office
This chamber is a prime example of military chaotic efficiency. Several
tables stand in the room, each with its own purpose. A table in the corner
bears refreshments, while against the wall a desk stands at the ready for
any missives to be written. A chandelier bearing many mirrored candles
hangs above a massive table which is covered with maps in various sizes,
showing troop deployments and supply- and messenger lines.
[ obvious exits: W ]
Last sentence:
showing troop deployments and supply- and messenger lines.
Not sure what's wrong with that?
there is a dash after the word supply, and and and... too many ands?
Possible solution:
showing troop deployments, supply routes, and messenger lines.
would have to remove the comma at the end of the sentence above that though.
The main thing was the random dash typo
after the word supply
Re: Typos
Posted: Sat Nov 09, 2019 5:51 pm
by Sanguine
Down with the Oxford comma!
Re: Typos
Posted: Sat Nov 09, 2019 6:28 pm
by Raefnal
It is a curved clear dagger.
It is a short blade.
It is in quite used.
Re: Typos
Posted: Wed Nov 13, 2019 5:44 pm
by Constantine
* S HP:Hurt MV:Fresh - : Wounded - Salan Mondoran: Beaten >
Salan Mondoran lances 's body.
-=+*
Salan Mondroan disappears with a flash of light!