Re: Typos

[Razhak]

o HP:Healthy DP:Bursting MV:Strong > Hallway of Art
Works of art from a lost time decorate this hall. Huge murals adorn the roof,
while along the walls tapestries and paintings are placed. The paintings are
nameless, the painters likewise, but they are beautiful works and have
survived time remarkably well.
[ obvious exits: N S ]
A shadow stallion has arrived from the north.

* HP:Healthy DP:Bursting MV:Strong > l painting
This painting shows the siege of Tar Valon, with Arthur Hawkwind in the
foreground. His shadow seems unnaturally still, his eyes reflect a distant
fire. Somehow, every stroke of the quill gives hidden meanings, details within
details. It is somehow disturbing.

[Dartes]

https://youtu.be/bEMZ30nEaMw

Hawkwind! Dragons and Fables.

[Talimar]

This is sort of nitpicky, but the Discrete man in KMG rent should be Discreet Man. Unless the original intent was for him to be a separate, completely distinct man, in which case, ignore me.

[Thuvia]

Zone: Deven Ride

Mistress Neehan is a short, somewhat hunched lady with hair that is beginning
to lose its color. She is hardly a defenseless woman; the strenous life of
working on a farm has apparently equipped her well to take care of herself.
Mistress Nehan is in excellent condition.

Name should be "Nehan", and the other typo

[Thuvia]

Zone: Deven Ride

Master Al'Dail

Master Al'Dail is here looking after his farm.

Master Al'Dail is clearly a farmer; his sunburned, leathery skin and his
large frame clearly attest to that. His hair is peppered with grey, but his
movements show the strength and grace of a much younger man.

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Gavin Al'Dail

Gavin Al'Dail is doing his chores here.

Gavin Al'Dail is a tall, rather thin young man. The down of his approaching
manhood is just appearing on his finely shaped features. His nose is long
and thin, just like his face. He moves very slowly about his chores; he
obviously does not like doing them.

I believe it should be "al'Dail" instead of "Al'Dail" in both cases

[Thuvia]

Zone: Deven Ride (and others)

Mob: an anxious aide

l anxious
It has no description.

Not really a typo per se, but no detailed description for this guy.

[Thuvia]

Zone: Taren Ferry

Mob: Finnegan

A hard looking man with a scar on his left cheek brushes a horse absently
as he watches you. He dosent look like he is from around here and isn't
very friendly. No one seems to know any name for him other than Finnegan.
He begins to scowl at you and demands to know if you are here on bussiness.

[Taziar]

Zone: Taren Ferry

Mob: Finnegan

A hard looking man with a scar on his left cheek brushes a horse absently
as he watches you. He dosent look like he is from around here and isn't
very friendly. No one seems to know any name for him other than Finnegan.
He begins to scowl at you and demands to know if you are here on bussiness.

Created before spellcheck technology was widespread...?

[Thuvia]

Mob: a fine piebald rouncey

Colourful ribbons bedeck its mane and tail each one embroided with the
Golden Tree of Tanchico. Deep of chest with graceful fetlocks the horse
looks ready to run for an age. Its sleek frame belies the fierce look in
its eyes. Well shod hooves look ready to kick out should you come too
close.

[Thuvia]

Zone: Lugard Rooftops

mob: a jewelry broker

This petite, dark eyed and dark eyed woman wears a high necked dark gown
which suggests the hails from Cairhien. She does not wear much in terms of
jewelry, but a jeweled comb in her hair and a craftily shaped bracelet
betray that she has a taste for quality, and not quantity, like some. She
neatly arranges a velvet cloth to display her wares on.

Should be "she" rather than "the".