The Fall of a Borderguard --- &RPaward

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Re: The Fall of a Borderguard

by Itesh » Tue Jul 14, 2020 5:27 am

Thank you. I'll check with her and correct ;)

Re: The Fall of a Borderguard

by isabel » Sun Jul 12, 2020 3:33 am

Thank you for reading and the kind words! It is very appreciated :)

Itesh - Cerys had awarded me for this two years ago - she edited the OP to reflect it if you click on page 1

Re: The Fall of a Borderguard

by Neveyan » Sat Jul 11, 2020 6:13 pm

Fantastic stuff Isabel! Very well written and I could feel the emotion.

Re: The Fall of a Borderguard

by Jaye » Fri Jul 10, 2020 6:09 am

Isabel this was amazing, I got goosebumps! :)

Re: The Fall of a Borderguard

by Razhak » Fri Jul 10, 2020 5:56 am

(ooc: My thanks to the player of Rhahr and the player of Ragyn for letting me use their characters. Couldn't get around to asking the Lancer players if it was okay so just turned it into reports/stories and references rather than direct speech. I was thinking of a more expanded version for this with more plot, but not sure how much readership there is anyway, so this is it for now :) Hope it was a good read!)
Very good read, and I would also like to point out this little snippet. It Always irks me when people use other peoples characters for their RP stories, especially in speaking roles, without any consent beforehand. You are then basically abusing their characters and may even be intruding on their RP.

The fact you asked these players beforehand is a really great example of how to actually go about this and deserved pointing out and commendation!

I hope other players will take this to heart :)

Re: The Fall of a Borderguard

by Itesh » Fri Jul 10, 2020 5:23 am

Bestowéd.

Re: The Fall of a Borderguard

by Kaan » Fri Jul 10, 2020 3:34 am

The writing quality and pace was great, too, on top of the story being fun to read. Late to see this, but props to you, Isabel.

Re: The Fall of a Borderguard

by Kordin » Fri Jul 10, 2020 3:00 am

Mikhan wrote:
Fri Jul 10, 2020 1:20 am
I haven’t looked at this forum for a long time, but Alvana’s post just prompted me to and I want to second her compliments — this was a fun and easy read that adds some wonderful depth to Isabel as a character. All the other PC mentions are great too. Good stuff, thanks for that. I also felt the oath at the end strongly
+1

Re: The Fall of a Borderguard

by Mikhan » Fri Jul 10, 2020 1:20 am

I haven’t looked at this forum for a long time, but Alvana’s post just prompted me to and I want to second her compliments — this was a fun and easy read that adds some wonderful depth to Isabel as a character. All the other PC mentions are great too. Good stuff, thanks for that. I also felt the oath at the end strongly

Re: The Fall of a Borderguard

by Alvana » Thu Jul 09, 2020 11:35 pm

This is really late, but this was a fantastic read. Reading the oath the conclusion of the story gave me goosebumps. Very well done.

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