by byrg » Wed Jun 24, 2020 2:01 am
Noticed this the other day - last mapped room descrip i have is this:
"The view here is amazing. To the east and slightly south east lie the twin
keeps which tower above everything. From here the vastness of the destuction
of the entire castle can be seen in its entirety. The roofs of both keeps
have collapsed in on themselves totally destroying the upper levels of both
keeps. Also most of the walls that used to provide excellent protection
against attack have nearly crumbled to nothing. A putrid smell of decay can
be sensed coming from the west, and a well lies to the south. The courtyard
extends in all directions from here."
Current one is this - looks like a sentence got chopped off somewhere - note the current end of the sentence doesn't end with a period, either.
The view here is amazing. To the east and slightly south. east lie the twin
keeps which tower above everything. From here the vastness of the
destruction of the entire castle can be seen in its entirety. The roofs of
both keeps have collapsed in on themselves totally destroying the upper
levels of both keeps. Also most of the walls that used to provide excellent
protection against attack have nearly crumbled to nothing. A putrid smell
of decay can be sensed coming from the west, and a well lies to the south
[ obvious exits: N E S W ]
Noticed this the other day - last mapped room descrip i have is this:
[i]
"The view here is amazing. To the east and slightly south east lie the twin
keeps which tower above everything. From here the vastness of the destuction
of the entire castle can be seen in its entirety. The roofs of both keeps
have collapsed in on themselves totally destroying the upper levels of both
keeps. Also most of the walls that used to provide excellent protection
against attack have nearly crumbled to nothing. A putrid smell of decay can
be sensed coming from the west, and a well lies to the south[b]. The courtyard
extends in all directions from here."[/b][/i]
Current one is this - looks like a sentence got chopped off somewhere - note the current end of the sentence doesn't end with a period, either.
[i]
The view here is amazing. To the east and slightly south. east lie the twin
keeps which tower above everything. From here the vastness of the
destruction of the entire castle can be seen in its entirety. The roofs of
both keeps have collapsed in on themselves totally destroying the upper
levels of both keeps. Also most of the walls that used to provide excellent
protection against attack have nearly crumbled to nothing. A putrid smell
of decay can be sensed coming from the west, and a well lies to the south
[ obvious exits: N E S W ][/i]