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Re: Typos

by trynhvar » Fri Sep 06, 2024 12:49 am

Palace Provisions
A wide counter stands at the back of the store where there is a large set
of hanging scales on which to weigh the produce. The counter is made up of
the same gleaming white marble that the rest of the store is, all polished
so it shines like fresh snow. The scents of garlic, peppers, apples,
sausage, and ice peppers blend in the air. Large bins of every type of
fruit and vegetable possible line the room. In locked chests behind the
counter are vials of precious spices that have been traded from across the
spine. A door to the south leads back out into the streets.
[ obvious exits: S ]
Zone: Domani Coastal Palace
Door south: Door
South: A gray palfrey prances skittishly nearby.
A merchant guard eyes you warily, intent on keeping order.
A merchant guard eyes you warily, intent on keeping order.
A shopkeeper stands here, restocking a few empty bins and shelves.

* HP:Scratched MV:Full >
buy shovel
A shopkeeper tells you 'The braile list is to the left.. seems you need it.'


Braille*

Re: Typos

by sleat » Sat Jul 13, 2024 2:33 am

should be "its"
A huge infested scorpion hits your body.
A blood-covered scorpion joins a huge infested scorpion's fight!
A blood-covered scorpion joins a huge infested scorpion's fight!
A blood-covered scorpion joins a huge infested scorpion's fight!
A blood-covered scorpion joins a huge infested scorpion's fight!
A blood-covered scorpion joins a huge infested scorpion's fight!

* S HP:Wounded MV:Tiring - a huge infested scorpion: Battered >
You panic and attempt to flee!


A blood-covered scorpion curls it's tail, ready to strike.

Re: Typos

by Jetros » Sun Jul 07, 2024 7:08 pm

Fencing blade clashing missing a period at the end:
* R HP:Scratched MV:Tiring - Geoff: Hurt - the brigand trooper: Battered >
A great clash resounds as Geoff crosses blades with the brigand trooper

Re: Typos

by Reyne » Mon Apr 29, 2024 5:15 am

You say 'rerank me please'

Please contact a staff memeber regarding your rank.
Should be "member."

Re: Typos

by melosa » Tue Apr 23, 2024 11:02 pm

When the Cairhien - TV coach arrived at TV, it says 'The coach has arrived at Cairhien '

Re: Typos

by Grizzler » Sun Apr 07, 2024 9:54 am

Using "Instruct me" at Boghag (Ahf clan head)

Boghag the Myrddraal whispers to you, 'These are the command you may issue. It is important to remember that'


Should be "...are the commands you may..."

Re: Typos

by Amarea » Sun Jan 28, 2024 9:15 pm

During one of the Yellow shawl quests:
A suffering Illian Companion asks weaky 'Any meat? I'm famished.'

And another during a Brown shawl quest:
Masuri Sokawa seems to give herself a shake, turns away from the books and focusses her gaze on you.

Also during a Brown shawl quest, there is one sentence that ends abruptly and seems to be missing something:
Masuri Sokawa chuckles and adds 'Not surprising, seeing how they're dice. This does imply, however, that dice were around when this

Re: Typos

by Helen » Sun Jan 14, 2024 3:43 pm

Yukiri Sedai says 'One of the Aes Sedai has been adivising the King of Illian in
matters of state.'

Re: Typos

by Hagbard » Thu Oct 26, 2023 3:52 am

The goldsmith in Cairhien has a typo: "Wearig" should be "Wearing"

The Royal Jeweler
This well-maintained shop is lined with glass cases, all of which display
fine jewelry of the highest quality, laid out on velvet and even silk. At
the back of the shop, a polished counter with a polished brass mirror
obscures the view of a pair of workbenches that sit in a back room.
[ obvious exits: W ]
A watchguard surveys the city streets here.
A young man dedicates himself to learning the goldsmithing trade.
Wearig a monocle, a goldsmith crafts jewelry here.

Re: Typos

by Asandra » Sat Oct 07, 2023 11:46 am

Should say to yes!

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